Young-Woon, you made a good start with adding photos to your blog. However the tasks was to write about it and the photos are used to support your writing. It would be good to introduce yourself with name and age and where you live and then go into more details of why you like spaghetti, chocolate ice cream and lions and wolves - look forward to read more in your post next time.
Young-Woon, you made a good start with adding photos to your blog. However the tasks was to write about it and the photos are used to support your writing. It would be good to introduce yourself with name and age and where you live and then go into more details of why you like spaghetti, chocolate ice cream and lions and wolves - look forward to read more in your post next time.
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